Today Emily and I's peice was shown to the rest of our class. They watched and then gave us both negative and positive feedback, this is so that we can evaluate and change our opening scene accordingly.
Positive points:
Good Cuts- they thought these were short and sharp and added tension and a thriller feel.
Mise en scene- works well, Noir thriller feeling
The sound works well as it was fitted to the different shots
Negative Points
We need to use more angles/shots in the running scene
Add more narrative to give a bigger view of the story which would unfold
and finally they thought we needed to Add better and more proffessional looking titles eg. instead of filmed by, use camera operator.
We have taken these points on board and have decided to use some to add depth and a all together more proffessional looking opening scene in the end.
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